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Messaging examples?

Becc, Sahil, I am getting so much from this webinar series and this forum! Thank you for the amazing content and for setting this up!


Becc, I have a question about the actual messaging. I pulled this from your cold call messaging and turned it into the initial email. What is your opinion? Is this on the right track?

Hi FIRST NAME,

(Reason for reaching out..)

Correct me if I’m wrong, (TITLE) care about ____ (PAIN POINT)

We work with (TITLE) who want to _________but don’t have____(VALUE PROP).

Are you running into any of this in your day to day?

How does Wed. at 2:00pm PT work to talk about how we help (TITLE) leverage our solution to achieve this goal?

All the best,  


How would you format subsequent personalized messages with the other "bucket" content?

Thanks in advance!!

Tina

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Becc Holland
Head of Sales Development at Chorus.ai
Hi Tina, great questions! As far as that talk track you listed above, it's for cold calls.  Once they agree to a "30 second commercial" after your up front contract, I would start with that structure.  So like I mentioned, I saw your X (personalized reason). At the end of the day correct me if I'm wrong, but (their role) care about X.  An... See more
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Becc, Thanks for your response!
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Susan Gonzalez
VP of Marketing at Asgard Technologies
ah lots of text here. Take advantage of bullets and white space.  ----  Suggestions: ---  Becc,   Thank you for the amazing content and for setting this up!  There is so much to learn and I appreciate the webinar series and forum you've created!      Quick question: How does this sound- FYI it's a Script? --- Name,    (Reason for reaching out..... See more
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Thanks for taking the time to respond, Susan.
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