surferboi69

Associate Account Executive

Alternatives to "I would love to ..."

I hate using the word love in e-mails, it seems insincere and unprofessional. However, I don't know another way of warmly saying "I would love to learn more about xyz"

What's a better way of phrasing this that's more succinct, professional and yet still warm?

💌 Cold Emailing

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CuriousFox

WR Officer

🦊

Cut the entire sentence and ask for an appointment. Make it about them, not you.

Rallier

Politicker

SDR Manager and Consultant

I'd ask for interest instead of a meeting. "Any interest in taking a closer look at this and seeing how we solve problem X?" or something along those lines

braintank

Politicker

Enterprise Account Executive

Can you give us an example of where you're using it?

surferboi69

Contributor

Associate Account Executive

Hi Bob,

I'm a member of your account team at x and thought you'd be interested in y.

Many of our customers are using xyz to prepare for their 2022 initiatives.

I would love to hop on a call with you to learn about z's 2022 iniatives, do you have availability next week?

Thanks

Sunbunny31

Politicker

Sr Sales Executive 🐰

Just go to:

"Do you have availability next week to hop on a call so I can learn about z's 2022 initiatives?"

braintank

Politicker

Enterprise Account Executive

Yup. Or:

Bob, many of our customers who are similar to you are using xyz to {value prop}.

Open to learning more?

Diablo

Politicker

Sr. AE

Why don't you book a time in my calendar and walk me through ...... so I can throw in some guidance?

braintank

Politicker

Enterprise Account Executive

I'm big on the interest based CTAs now. Less work for everyone.

poweredbycaffeine

WR Lieutenant

☕️

Who tf cares about what you want? No one but you...so listen to @CuriousFox, and stop using the line.

Replace with a value proposition that shows them why they should be giving you their time.

"When can we set up a call to discuss your plans to address XYZ challenge in 2022?"

This only works if you highlight the pain of the challenge and how you help companies like them overcome it.

Chep

WR Officer

Bitcoin Adoption Specialist

Personally a big fan of the line I'm interested to learn more about your business and see if my solution could help. Then go for your ask.

braintank

Politicker

Enterprise Account Executive

People hate that. They want you to come with a hypothesis based on your own research. No prospect wants to get on the phone and explain their business to a random rep.

GingerBarbarian

Opinionated

Lead Sales

I like brutal honesty.

"Let me be direct. I have no clue if my product can help you. But I am going to get chewed out if I don't try and see. Can we save us both some time, have a 5 minute talk and see if it is even worth me chasing you and you deleting my emails and dodging my calls?"

crusherdestroyer

Fire Starter

account executive

similarly, I hate seeing people use "let me know if xyz" -- I always use "Please tell me if xyz"

taxa

Fire Starter

Marketing and Sales Specialist

I’m a rookie guys so take it easy.
When I’m trying to have a date with someone I usually say that let’s do it on thursday 5 pm what do you think? So like I give two options first yes, second no but let’s meet on friday 4 pm. Maybe you can edit this and use it for your thing mate

caS2ie

Good Citizen

All things people

Cut the line.
"Let's hop on a call..."

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