Creative ways of saying "following up"

Hey everyone,


Really interested in getting some creative takes on what you're using in emails instead of saying "follow(ing) up on" when you're replying all to the emails you've sent to prospects/existing customers who aren't replying to specific things.


I cringe every time I write it because I use it so much––because a large portion of my day is honestly "following up" on things. Sometimes I write "coming back (to you) on" just to switch it up but aside from that I've not been successful in coming up with alternatives quick phrases like this that have the same meaning.


Any ideas?

🔎 Prospecting
👑 Sales Strategy
💌 Cold Emailing
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Telehealth_2the_Moon
Notable Contributor
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Director of Business Development
Whenever I'm emailing a prospect I think about how I can make the email about THEM. "Following up" emails are some of the hardest to do this, but it's important they know why they should care about following up with you.

In practice this often means I bring up their main reasons for engaging with us in the first place, especially if a timeframe for a decision has come up. "Last week you mentioned wanting to see an ROI analysis of the solution and agreed to gather the data needed for this. Is this still the best plan forward?"

Also, I recommend keeping a set of "keep warm" resources. Both company specific things like marketing materials and white papers, but also 3rd party things like relevant articles or resources for the field. I'll send those out as a way to remind them I exist while hopefully providing some value and avoiding "checking in" on them. Them seeing my name is likely a reminder enough of what step is needed.
CuriousFox
WR Officer
11
🦊
Absolutely exactly all of what you said.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
3
Account Executive
Very sound approach, much appreciated
Sunbunny31
Politicker
3
Sr Sales Executive 🐰
Yes, tie it back to a specific thing that was discussed and the outstanding task/step you're trying to address. Love this response.
jefe
Arsonist
3
🍁
Just do everything @Telehealth_2the_Moonsuggested.
antiASKHOLE
Tycoon
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Bravado's Resident Asshole
I found this a while back and it has help out quite a bit. Easy to scroll through and easy to follow.

https://marketcircle.blog/8-polite-follow-up-email-samples/
SteveD
Member
1
Sales Director
Wow fantastic find. I also like a lot of stuff Ample market puts out. http://blog.amplemarket.com/a-simple-guide-to-prepare-for-each-inbound-sales-call/
Filth
Politicker
9
Live Filthy or Die Clean
I like to use the excuse of "going through my records" "Looking back at the calendar, I know we talked <date> but I am foggy on <some detail>" and "I was taking a look at our notes from last tuesday and I ..." or "I was talking with my <insert dept name here> team and wanted to confirm..."

I also straight up say follow up at other times b/c there is nothing wrong with being honest and blunt if you aren't getting their attention other ways.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
Awesome adds :) Thanks!
Justatitle
Big Shot
9
Account Executive
Depends on your style

radical candor: “My boss is going to ask me so I am asking you, please help me have an answer for my boss”

self-deprecating: “I’m not that great at what I do so I was hoping you could help me look good”

funny: “ yes this is a follow-up email/call.”

to the point: “Hi xyz, on our last conversation there were a few items left open so I am looking to understand

- point a
- point b
- etc…

hope this helps
Kosta_Konfucius
Politicker
3
Sales Rep
Big fan of "to the point"
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
3
Account Executive
That's all great stuff. Really appreciate the input.
Mereynol
1
Client Advisor
Also a big fan of “to the point”

When you use radical candor, what’s your typical response? I like it, I just have a hard time believing the recipient would care that your boss needs an answer
Chipsandsalesa
Good Citizen
3
Sales Development Rep
I do a slightly different approach to the boss reply where I use it to an objection email (since I rarely get a response if I ask straight up why they’re not interested) I’ll say something along the lines of “yeah I definitely understand if this isn’t a service you’re considering at the moment! But when I have to move in from a firm my boss will ask me what the reasoning was. Could you provide me with a little insight, are y’all using another data provider or is this a timing/budget concern”
I almost always get a response and have been able to turn a few of those objections into meetings/closed deals
Gasty
Notable Contributor
5
War Room Community Manager
Our team 2X’d their response rate with this scalable + creative + 1time investment gif approach.

#ThereIsStillALittleHopeOnLinkedinMaybe
antiASKHOLE
Tycoon
3
Bravado's Resident Asshole
what are they putting as the subject line?
Gasty
Notable Contributor
1
War Room Community Manager
It's a reply on the same email thread. The finger pointing upward in GIF is basically pointing (guiding) the prospect to look at the email above in the same thread.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
Can say I've never sent a GIF to a prospect, but certainly something to consider. But from an email?
Gasty
Notable Contributor
1
War Room Community Manager
Try it @SalesTanuki. You won’t regret it.

ps: GIFs work better on LinkedIn messages.
SDM
Politicker
0
Sales development manager
I have tried Mr.bean gif..
SteveD
Member
1
Sales Director
I've started doing GIFs from some use case videos we have and looks like response rates are a lot better. Remember GIFs can be heavy and get blocked by some client's emails (10Mb limits)
Kosta_Konfucius
Politicker
0
Sales Rep
Did you team create a gif of themselves or used this?
Gasty
Notable Contributor
1
War Room Community Manager
Each member created it. One time investment
braintank
Politicker
2
Enterprise Account Executive
What are you following up about?
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
E.g. a demo they asked for and then sent them some times but they didn't reply, asking for feedback on how things are going using our tool, if a new feature we've released would be helpful and if they're interested in reconnecting
braintank
Politicker
2
Enterprise Account Executive
I'd pepper in calls if you're not already. Most of those things we be more productive as conversations vs emails
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
0
Account Executive
Fully agree it would be a good way forward.

This brings up another pertinent question for me though.. how do you get a prospects phone number when it's not in their email signature, and your company doesn't use any service for that?

It feels a bit uncouth to straight up ask for it at the end of a disco call or a demo.

Would you use a plugin like Lusha or something and then if they ask how you got their number say you got it from a service online?

For a prospect you've spoken to several times?
braintank
Politicker
1
Enterprise Account Executive
Ask them.
SalesWhisperer
Member
0
Division Sales Manager
What number can I reach you at next time? Hey, your e-mail signature doesn't have your phone number. Would you mind telling me what it is for my records?
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
0
Account Executive
So simple and I should definitely be doing that
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
Awesome suggestions! Thank you very much :)
PineappleYa
Opinionated
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AE
Wanted to reconnect on x
How are you feeling on y ?
What questions have come up on x?
How can i help with y?
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
0
Account Executive
Nice!
Dallas_Knight
Big Shot
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Strategic Account Executive
I put it on their timeline, " I do not mean to bother you but as we discussed for us to do ________ by __________ we need _________
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
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Account Executive
This is good
aiko
Politicker
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Sr. Account Executive
You can have your manager follow up to you, and then you can fwrd the email to your prospect, this way they know that its not just you who has eyes on the project.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
Wow this would be quite effective I think, very good idea
I_eat_SaaS
Contributor
2
Account Executive
Circling back around
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
2
Account Executive
To me, personally, this is the same as follow up in its cliché. But thank you!
Pachacuti
Politicker
1
They call me Daddy, Sales Daddy
Always think about what you'd want to see in a follow up email.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
good point for sure
SDM
Politicker
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Sales development manager
I keep it to the point and it helped in saving the time of both the parties... Unless I am unsure of anything
ThatNewAE
Big Shot
1
Account Executive - Mid enterprise
"Touching base"
"Checking up on ..."
"Bumping the note / message"
"Syncing back in"
"Get together to see how the evaluation is coming along"
:Going through our past conversations"
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
0
Account Executive
I've used all of these before, too! Thank you for replying :)
connorstewart
Old School Bravo
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President
Forget about any excuse or logical reason. Follow up directly and make your ask to progress the deal further. Everyone is busy, nobody wants to play games, be sincere, direct and honest in your ask. Your prospects will respect it and return the favour. Forget about “following up”, reach out and make your ask!
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
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Account Executive
Fully agree with this, although difficult for me to put into practice sometimes. Afraid that being too direct could be off putting, but I am 98% sure that is all in my head.
connorstewart
Old School Bravo
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President
Don’t think of it as asking for the sale. You likely aren’t there yet, however, if you’ve had a meeting or two and the prospect has shown interest in what your offering and agreed to next steps. You have earned the right to ask to take it further with them. Your time is valuable too - the only way to get the right response from prospects with this approach is when you respect your own time as much as you respect theirs. Relationships are a two way street. Your best relationships in life are built on respect and mutual benefit, business relationships are the same.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
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Account Executive
Thanks for replying!

Looks like that article suggests using "Did you get a chance to..." a lot in the case of following up on previous emails you've sent that haven't been replied to yet.
KB_FarmerType
Opinionated
0
Strategic Sales
I say “hey just checking , have you given up on …____…. “

Most likely they respond back
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
I have also found that "Have you given up on" generally works to get a reply. It's one I save until I've "followed up" a few times though.
punishedlad
Tycoon
0
🧙‍♂️
If I haven't gotten a response to an email, especially one that has info/content that I spent some time on, I'll say something like "Hey _____, pushing this to the top of your inbox in case you didn't see it"
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
This is a tried and true one indeed.
SoccerandSales
Big Shot
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Account Executive
I am a big fan of just a one line email that asks a specific question. Response rate is usually high for that as well.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
1
Account Executive
I should be doing this more for sure, whenever I do it works.
RckChlkG33k
Big Shot
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AE (Account Executive)
The old "I forgot-What was supposed to happen after our last conversation?" trick can work wonders.

Only use it appropriately, and sparingly. No more than once per contact, and try not to do it multiple times at the same account.

But it can restart the momentum of a dead conversation.
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
0
Account Executive
Oh this is a nice trick I will be keeping in the ol' back pocket. Thank you!
ChickenDinner
Politicker
0
Account Executive
sometimes i've titled an email "Progressing" and in the email say something like, "How is the conversation about...(whatever topic of impact we've been discussing that my product solves for) at (company name) progressing? What do you need from me?"
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
0
Account Executive
I like that
SalesWhisperer
Member
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Division Sales Manager
You could add a little variety to the way you're contacting them.

Send them a video e-mail (Bomb Bomb, Dubb) instead, for example. So, I can't wait to hear how x works for you.

Or maybe a picture of yourself (thinking, <3 on their brand) and say I was just thinking of you, our last conversation, the question you'd asked... (fill in the blank.)

Send audio e-mail... we last left things at... how has it progressed? It just occurred to me that...

Send a meme/picture - Halloween's coming up - dying to find out (xx).

Specifically, for a demo request, I'd send them my Calendly link so they can schedule it. Make it easy to do business with you. :) Following up on it, you could say something like... my calendar is so lonely without you.

The point is a pattern interrupt. They get attention because not many people take the time to do this type of thing.
FranchiseSalesQB
Politicker
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Franchise Sales QB
Top of my list
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
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Account Executive
Could you elaborate on how you'd use this? :)
Chipsandsalesa
Good Citizen
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Sales Development Rep
Something simple like “saw an article online and was thinking of you, thought I’d touch base…”
The_Sales_Badger
Notorious Answer
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Account Executive
Hand-written thank you cards.
JDialz
Politicker
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Chief Operating Officer
If it’s a prospect we have met with 1+ times, often say “Just finished a client meeting with one of your fellow [company] VPs - he/she was saying nice things about you behind your back. We should connect [date at time] to discuss some market ideas our analysts feel *very* strongly about.”
SalesTanuki
Catalyst
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Account Executive
I see this working in specific cases. Just not applicable to inbound leads from new accounts, which is more of what I typically deal with :D Thank you for your input!
JDialz
Politicker
0
Chief Operating Officer
Ah yeah nah, would not recommend.
AnchorPoint
Politicker
0
Business Coach
Always add value. Always.
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