Do you think you have a good headline on your LinkedIn profile?

Disclaimer: part of my side job is to help sales people figure out how to use LinkedIn. I've been doing so for the past 8 years, and I started doing with my teams first. To be very honest, they figured it out before I did and I learned from them. I just got obsessed with it later on and figured out how to make money with it :)


That being said, one of the things I crashed into first was also the "weirdest / most challenging / it can get personal" part of a LinkedIn profile, and that's the headline. You know, LinkedIn used to (it still does it you allow it to) populate that with your current job position, so if your current job says "Account Manager", that's what it'll say. You can thankfully change it now.


The way I think of Headlines is that it is the first space where you can actually pitch (other than you background image) something. So, if you could pitch something to someone (the ol' elevator pitch thing), would you actually start with: "John Doe, Account Executive", or would you rather well, pitch?


So I created this matrix that has 2 axises: vertical for clarity, meaning how clearly does the text in your headline describe what you can do for your customer, NOT what your paycheck says, and horizontal for creativity, meaning how original / creative do you get when pitching.


You will also notice a line called "Threshold of credibility", which is basically the limit between a great headline and BS. Let me put this it way: "Helping customers achieve their financial goals" is good. Maybe not great, but good. "Saving customers from wasting money while realizing they can live better by eating, praying and loving" is just plain BS. I'm sure you can think of a few people that do that in their profiles...

What you see below is an example I used on a training I gave to a bunch of sales people selling in the HR / Sourcing / Recruiting space.


Tell me what you think, I can always use the feedback! And more importantly, where do you think your profile headline fits? There's a poll too, go ahead and vote!



How would you describe your linkedin profile headline?

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funcoupons
WR Officer
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I roll my eyes so fucking hard when I see any of the language used in the "thought provoking" category.ย 
CaneWolf
Politicker
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Call me what you want, just sign the damn contract
Agreed. And people who say things such as "email marketing enthusiast" or "passionate personalization professional." Now I just feel bad for you and I don't want to do business with you.
funcoupons
WR Officer
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Hahaha, so true. Comes off as so fake and desperate.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
You should see some of the stuff I have to deal with...favorite one? "Making children happy at night"...for a guy that sold glowing star stickers for bedroom ceilings.
Kinonez
Celebrated Contributor
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War Room Enthusiast
I also hate when people put their titles, it feels like they are blowing their own horn. You should use your knowledge to teach shitposters how to become legends in the WR!
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
I would ask current legends to do that, they'll do better lol. But I hear you!
Kinonez
Celebrated Contributor
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War Room Enthusiast
Why don't you become a legend and teach the new commers?ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
not my thing. Happy to share what I know, but very far from that kind of goal.
Kinonez
Celebrated Contributor
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War Room Enthusiast
But teaching is. I'd rather have a great teach who was an average sales rep than a legend sales rep who is a lousy teacher. I'd probably learn more from the first.
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
I was an average rep allright, I think my finest job was a sales director. Loved this exchange, you gave me something to ponder on.
Kinonez
Celebrated Contributor
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War Room Enthusiast
Everyone has different strengths and weaknesses it's what makes us human. I enjoyed the exchange as well
NoSuperhero
Politicker
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BDR LEAD
Yeah, I'm trying to sound more than what I am, just a cold calling sales rep. LMAO
Kinonez
Celebrated Contributor
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War Room Enthusiast
ย  You are way more than a rep who does cold calling, you are what drives income into the org. Managers cost money, and they don't produce it, they are there to train the reps who are responsible to drive revenue that the AE's close.ย 
AlphaCharlie
Arsonist
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Account executive
I think it's important to be creative, that's what stands out!
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
Yep, as long as you don't get TOO creative lol
poweredbycaffeine
WR Lieutenant
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Let's all agree to stick to Practical and Inconsequential unless your company "employer brand" requires you to do otherwise.
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
That's a safe approach, but you can also look interesting without really bullshitting people. Thought Provoking is the hard one. Everyone gets weird on that one.
poweredbycaffeine
WR Lieutenant
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What is your role, by the way?
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
My role is Director of Digital Sales Transformation
poweredbycaffeine
WR Lieutenant
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What does that mean exactly? The reason I ask is that you post some heady, yet compelling content...but I'm not sure it always lands with the audience that is focused on their specific sales motion/cadence.
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
Not sure I'm following you here, but I'll try to respond: my role has nothing to do with what I post here. I'm currently responsible for digital sales transformation, which means I just help sales teams figure out what tech they need, how to use it efficiently (and avoid overspending) and crush their numbers.ย 

The content I post here is based on my experience in different sales roles more than it is about my current one. I've had many roles in sales like most of us here, so I post about that.

Hope that helped?
CuriousFox
WR Officer
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Mine is my title and I help x do y. I need to update it because I've been bored with it anyway.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
You could just put "Curious as a Fox" and boom. (?)
Blackwargreymon
Politicker
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MDR
I think it's important to be creative, that's what stands out!
Clashingsoulsspell
Politicker
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ISR
I think it's important to be creative, that's what stands out!
Mr.Pickles
Arsonist
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Sr. Customer Success Manager
I'm more into quick concise msgs - "I help [segment] do X with Y". When you go into those wonder phrases embed with spooky language like "enthusiast" or "guru" feels like some weird Instagram sh1t.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
Agreed, and you just push people away!
Mr.Pickles
Arsonist
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Sr. Customer Success Manager
that wording makes me fall into the threshold of credibility.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
you mean it puts you to the right? The threshold is the line that separates thought provoking and interesting from too good to be true and too fantastic.
Mr.Pickles
Arsonist
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Sr. Customer Success Manager
100%ย 
SalesGal
Politicker
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Account Executive
I rarely give people's headline much attention. I rather see detailed sales experience for example. Unless the headline is full of emojis...that's just annoying.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
0
Director - Digital Sales Transformation
good one, I don't like emojis there either.
theroyalmasbaum
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Sales Consultant
A recent job I had hired me because of my LinkedIn headline, which includes "Magician" and "Good Listener" lol.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
Ha! Well, there's always one ;)
cw95
Politicker
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Sales Development Lead
My job title and headline makes no sense to anyone, It makes me sound really smart but I haven't a clue about anything that the title entails.ย 
alecabral
Arsonist
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Director - Digital Sales Transformation
Well, it's really about what other people get from it. If they get are getting something out of it you're fine!
cw95
Politicker
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Sales Development Lead
V true!
MR.StretchISR
Politicker
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ISR
I roll my eyes so fucking hard when I see any of the language used in the "thought provoking" category.
Mr.Floaty
Politicker
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BDR
Failing to develop deep pain points, instead of sticking to surface-level annoyances.
Cyberjarre
Politicker
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BDR
If you are selling a product that will cause great pain when it comes to switching products or great pain to the company's wallet, then you need to have a deep tie into the pain point you are solving.
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