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Keep it vague or precise in cold outreach for email subject lines

I receive different opinions on this everyday so I think a poll will help me decide how to frame my email cadences. Do you see more success in your open / click rates when the subject line is vague (Appropriate Person?, Quick Question?, Any initiative?, etc.) or do you have more success being concise w relevance ("Company Name- Prospects name", Referred by prospect, or adding relevance in the subject line in general, etc.). I have mush brain today so hopefully this question makes sense.

Better subject line for cold email outreach?
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poweredbycaffeine
WR Officer
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Bean Juice Drinker | Sales Savant
I recently A:B tested this, and I found that the specific, concise subjects opened less, but the click-through and meeting booking rate was higher when they did open them, as opposed to the vague subject lines with high opens and low conversion. They were more serious prospects, leading to a higher conversion from meeting to opportunity.
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BusterMcDialRipper
Politicker
+7
Director of Dials
this response is GAS
OpalTiddyChurger
Arsonist
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Funbags Enthusiast
I wonder if you could combine that in your sequence to get more opens initially and the follow ups are more concise?
poweredbycaffeine
WR Officer
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Bean Juice Drinker | Sales Savant
It's worth a shot on our next iteration!
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DatCocoCream
Good Citizen
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Training & Development
Appreciate the insight on this. Simple concept, that makes a whole lot of sense, that I still never thought about. Bless you.
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BusterMcDialRipper
Politicker
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Director of Dials
fuckin unreal poll @DeskPhoneDestroyerΒ 
DeskPhoneDestroyer
Catalyst
+5
Team Lead
thanks bustermcdialripper

Kinonez
Celebrated Contributor
+9
WR Enthusiast
I think the most important aspect is that it's relevant. If you manage to keep it both short and relevant you are a beast. If not I would still go for relevant over vague.Β 
ColdCallFartBoy
Celebrated Contributor
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Business Development Representative
Concise is nice #Off-Topic #Mentorship #Cold-Emailing
funcoupons
WR Officer
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up in Fiji, under paddy
I chose the second option but I think both have their place...but length does matter. (Yeah yeah, that's what she said.) The subject line isn't a place for a whole sentence.
DeskPhoneDestroyer
Catalyst
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Team Lead
Im sure length has never been an issue for funcouponsΒ 
funcoupons
WR Officer
+11
up in Fiji, under paddy
It's not about the email length it's how u use it!!!
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AllBiteNoBark
Politicker
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Account Executive
I use Prospect name/ Sean intro and get around 65% opens.Β 
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BusterMcDialRipper
Politicker
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Director of Dials
sean usually replies to all of my emails too
NoSuperhero
Politicker
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BDR
Length really matters tho.
HindsightHarry
Praised Answer
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Account Executive
Treat your prospect like it’s your first message on tinder.
pretengineer
Politicker
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Head of the crumpets
Relevant and presice, especially the higher up you go. Really prescriptive. Gives a lot more relevance. Maybe something generic (that opens to hyperspecific) like: Hey <name>, I recorded a quick video of your site! does well too.
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