Hey War Room,
I am trying to move into the SaaS space from hardware sales. I’m not getting any traction reaching out to recruiters on Linkedin. I want to come up with a great message to send to managers and sales reps on Linkedin but I am a terrible writer.
How does this message sound?
Hope things are well with you. I see that you work at COMPANY X and I’ve heard really good things about the company.
I saw a role on your companies career page that interested me and I want to learn more about it to see if I would be a good fit.
Would it be okay if I gave you a quick call to learn more about the role and your company sometime this week or next?