Cold email template ?

there's no magic bullet to cold emailing per se but definitely some good ideas to remember. 

I'm reaching out to leaders in the engineering/IT Operatiosn and Cybersecurity space. Curious what you all think of this framework to go by. 

For reference, I'm contacting commercial orgs 500-2K employees, typically in the tech sector. 

I try to keep emails under 100 words max and the initial outreach framework is something like:

subject: 2-3 words simple 

Hi Name,

opener: reference an insight or observation about the company/role/industry and point to a common issue. 

value: Exhibit a new way to solve this via our tool

CTA: mind if I share a resource about this?

Name - any thoughts? insight on issue 

value prop with social proof. 

Is this a relevant priority?

Example: email 1 

subject: top SIEM alerts

Hi Mike,

"SOC teams spend countless hours responding to alerts as they come in, yet many struggle to identify the top 1% most threatening alerts. 

One way to solve this is to leverage threat intelligence to risk score the alerts and assign the most severe to your top engineers. 

Mind if I share a resource on this?"

Mike - any thoughts on this? Asking because rapid data growth storage often causes SIEM prices to skyrocket and same with the number of alerts. 

X Company was able to cut their siem cost by 50% while also identifying their most severe alerts to remediate first. 

Are these a priority for your team? 

Curious to people's thoughts as I'm trying to be relevant but also scalable. if I catch a more personalized trigger for the company I'll mention it in my opener so they know I've done my research but I used this slightly more generic one here.