Grade my paper, please.

Scenario, ML startup with a forward looking technology. Bootstrapped, but marquee logos in POV. Solution is something for everyone at some point. Targets and ICPs are many. No real way to distill it. Current GTM is unscalable, 1 person show. Zero budget, good cold outreach tool + Sales Navigator + GPT. Image doesn't show details of persona but they're there.


First pass at repeatable framework.

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Pachacuti
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They call me Daddy, Sales Daddy
I know its a draft, but you need to step it up. That looks very high school.

That said, I'm concerned about the "start-up" "bootstrapped" "unscalable" comments. Unless you aren't working for the money, that seems like a VERY high risk scenario.
oldcloser
Arsonist
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Concern registered. Appreciate that. I won't deny the risk factor, but I'm extremely tolerant when I'm only counting on me. I'm greedy too. It's got real folks driving it. A couple of spin offs and exits between them. It's only about the money. Last role had 18 direct reports, a SDR manager and that team. Well funded. Was a nightmare. I'm going soup to nuts this time. If the earth gets soggy, I'll scream.
Pachacuti
Politicker
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They call me Daddy, Sales Daddy
You gotta do you. Good luck!
Sunbunny31
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Sr Sales Executive ๐Ÿฐ
Digital transformation? You really went there? ;)
oldcloser
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Mostly for illustrative purposes. But yeah :)
Beans
Big Shot
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Enterprise Account Executive
You need WAY more dials.
oldcloser
Arsonist
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What I get for holding back what's in each sequence. Point well taken. Those calls are cherry pick calls only. Each sequence has them baked in. Was really wondering if I was missing a channel before I get this baked. Or if LI was out of order behind cold email. Ya think?
coletrain
Politicker
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Account Executive
No shot on three calls. Those are rookie numbers of calls in a sequence. Any use case emails tossed in there?
oldcloser
Arsonist
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Next time I go and post a sketch like this, I will clarify the contents of each sequence- or at least what I'm asking. Yeah, there are use case emails and many calls, including 5 x 5 days up front and 1 a week in long term nurture for pretty much life.

What I was looking for grades on - was the channels and order. I'd delete the mess, but too late to clarify.

appreciate the feedback
Maximas
Tycoon
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Senior Sales Executive
More calls,more calls,more calls and dials!
oldcloser
Arsonist
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Aiiiiii. They're in the sequences. I"m deleting this post, then myself.
nah... I'll take it
CuriousFox
WR Officer
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You're good boo. Very brave. No self deletion allowed.
oldcloser
Arsonist
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:) Here's proof!
ChickenWings
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Tom Callahan's Son
So they get hit on 3 sequences before any personalization takes place? Or are you depending on GPT to personalize in those sequences?

Unless your prompts are insanely good, youโ€™ll need some manual intervention earlier in (and throughout) the outreach.

oldcloser
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Thereโ€™s personalization throughout. Literally impossible to post all of it without a self dox. #shitpost - owning it
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