Hi Guys,
I found the email address of the recruiter at Salesforce. Should I go ahead and email this person?
My name is , and I applied for the role of Business Development Representative through the referral of , who is currently a BDR at Salesforce Toronto. I got your name through him.
I'm just checking in to see if there have been any developments with my application for the role above. Salesforce is a large organization, and I believe you must have gotten 100s of resumes for the role, so I understand if more time is taken to process my application.
I do not have work experience in a Saas sales team, and I am sure you must be seeing a lot of qualified candidates, and you could hire any of them. But what I bring to the table is that I am a fast learner, passionate not just about technology, but the business value clients gain through technology. I love to show people what I have learned about a specific software or feature of the software and how it can be used to maximize their business value. I am good at teaching people the technical aspects of the software solution(what it does, and how to implement it) and correlating it with long-term business value. I am also excellent at understanding how systems work with each other. I have experience as a product owner solving business problems, building product strategies, and creating roadmaps, so I am sure this experience will be valuable to salesforce. But above everything, I naturally help people even when I don't get paid to do it.
Further, I do not treat Salesforce as another option, right now, my sole focus is Salesforce. Some people told me not to put all my eggs in one basket, but I think if you genuinely want something, there is nothing wrong with focusing on that one thing. Salesforce has been a dream of mine since 2019, but I was in Sri Lanka, so it was not that realistic. The pay is excellent at Salesforce, but above that, I have seen the CEO ratings on Comparably, client reviews on Gartner, and employee reviews on glassdoor, reinforcing my goal. I am willing to learn everything required to succeed at Salesforce, within 6 months I will be an expert in everything Salesforce.
I have attached my resume for your reference.
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Hi (recruiter name),
(Referrer name) suggested reaching out to you, as he/she referred me as an applicant to the (title) role.
I’m confident about meeting the requirements for the position and would love to to share a bit more about why I think I’d fit in well at (organization name).
Would it be possible to connect for 15 minutes later this week?
Best, (OP name)
What do you guys think. Is this too long????
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