Hi all - wanted to post my email template below that I've been using. Wondering where this can be improved. Getting very very little hits but a lot of opens and tired of sending out emails and getting a bunch of views but no replies. Maybe it's personalization, but I'm a little stuck because there is some personalization in my emails. See the below:
Subject: (NAME)/js2458 Connect - (Brief Angle)
NAME -
Reaching out off the back of a recommendation for (company title) alongside (competitor title) and (competitor title) through our work with Forrester.
My organization is bringing together a group of fortune 500 Chief Merchandising Officers and COOs for a program in (date) at the (location)
Given a major focus for the group is around improving (angle), it seems like, on the surface, (company title) would be a great fit to work with our executives.
I've included a link below which will take you to our website where you can see the group that we're bringing together in (date):
(link) // (date), (location)
If these are good prospects for you to meet with and ultimately sell into, let me know when you have a few minutes this week to connect.
All the Best,
js2458
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