Tuesday is cold outbound day! Here's a fresh one I got, and an example of what not to do. Assuming this is #2 or #3 in a sequence, but I dunno:
Just wanted to circle back and make sure that youโre the right point of contact in regards to a potential collaboration.
We only work with carefully vetted companies that we know we could help, and I believe thereโs room for a beneficial partnership.
Let me know if I need to reach out to somebody else within the company.
-name
"Happiness depends upon us." - Aristotle
Yeah, ok. So collaborate? Partner? On what? And why would I send you to somebody else unless I don't like that person? I have no idea what you're offering or the value, and I am not going to go search for your earlier email to figure that out. Sorry, dude.
Anybody got some good fresh ones they received today (or recently, I won't know the difference) that miss the mark?
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